The dark shadows of life have surrounded me,
as I walk in trepidation,
timidly searching
for the third power,
to bestow my release.
My unguarded demeanour
has been immaterial,
as I have
forever traversed these caverns
of pessimism.
Finally encountering
the power,
my essence is distressed.
As I grasp for solace,
my spirit is soothed
and my soul begins to find
serenity...
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration.....LOOK Inside....Welcome to the Fringe by Luna Tique Fringe.
475 points, ended April 16, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow truly beautiful so powerful and intense I love the sense of hope you give at the end, well done.
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Thank you for entering,
This plays upon my mind, the third power. Hauntingly beautiful, the mood created. Well done. -
ohhh love this is beautiful...utterely amazing well done i think its totally amazing xxx
laura xxxx
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Excellent
Now that's some form of energy! This was a great version of the picture. Good luck in the contest.
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