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Dying Shadows Of Forever

There's no over-coming this empty feeling within me.
For months on end,
For years to come.

I am forever more covered in shame.
These tears that I've cried
Over your forever hating game.

I let them fill this glass

(Broken Love)

Is written around the endges
I can only hope that this shall pass

Oh,
But I know all too well
I know better than to blieve.

Promise me forever,
Go ahead,

I DARE YOU

I dare you to take my heart away again

I bet you'll do it too.
And with that you will leave.

You would,
All too well do I know you.

Blood use to spill
Run down this arm,
This wrist.

Immune to every pill
To the kill
To the darkness of your kiss.

Every time the phone rings,
I long to run away
Long to disappear

I'd feel better if I were not alone
But I had no choice
It was and is my fear
No longer is this my voice.

I lost you forever,
Lost you for good.
Weather it was my fault or not,
That we no longer walk together.

My heart is no longer mine,
It has been ripped in half.
But,

It doesn't matter,
Someone else would have done it for you in due time.

You left me wounded,
Without a single word.

Wondered away
Nothing spoken,
From you I have not heard.

It hurts,
I burn from the inside.

I can still feel the nails
Driving through this heart of mine.
Leaving endless trails
Behind with scars this time.

So if it was your intention to leave me wounded and broken
Then you have done so,
Without a single word spoken.

I congradulate you on this one,
You have accomplished the pain.

But I ask if you are done
So we can clink glasses of champagne.

Your triumph deserves a toast
But we shouldn't,
No one likes it when you boast.

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  • Felix BlackHeart
    May 13, 2007

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    this is really good. I like the way you worded it. thanx for entering! I think your poem was really good, very well writen!
    Felix BlackHeart


  • Roseycheeks15
    April 10, 2007

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    This makes me think about mark! i know if i give him my heart again he will just break it again and again..
    love alway Rosey!

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