I see you set with an angels face
Among the darkened tombstones grace
A grin held with a bottle green stare
I see that evil comes in a pair
Forgiving you for playing out desires
You hide yourself amongst the liars
I stare at you from across the way
Without a word you urge me to stay
You wear a broken heart on your sleeve
Silently I allow you to grieve
I wait in the shadows until dawn
Though you expect to see me gone
I've forgiven you once before
What makes you think I can't once more?
I see my love in that angels face
Through its broken and frail embrace
With a drawn look through your raven hair
An agonizing love was declared
I've forgiven you once before
I won't forgive myself if I do once more
Promise me this is something I won't regret
And I'll allow death to sing loves duet
Forever
Author notes
Option #6
Okay most of my friends on here know my image of a perfect vampire is perfectly described in here. Long black hair and green eyes.....hmmm....okay lol I'm done. Although it wasnever said he was a vampire, the image still comes to mind. Does it not?
A contest entry
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425 points, ended April 17, 2007, 23 entries
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This seems familiar...like perhaps I read it once before. but even so it is worth another and another and yet another read!
Blessed be,
azlyn
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I like this, with such a tragic ending though, I can relate, though in my case I was the man who had his heart broken and took the girl back. ~Corey~
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Thank you for your entry and good luck in my contest.
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Awesome You're A Great Writer I Love How You Describe Things To Where The Reader Can Picture It In Their Minds That Is Hard To Do For A Lot Of People It Flows Great
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Thank you very much. i am really glad you liked it. I was trying to get the perfect image in my head and write about it! Again thanks for reading it, and I am glad that you liked it
Andrea
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