x.
Dare you step again
cross the line
into tangled thorns
a phonecall changed to
riddled passages
in forgotten books.
xx.
Pages turned by worn hands
writhed veins
crossed under ashen flesh
discoloured
you need saving
from yourself.
xxx.
you think the
rouged colours
and glossy sheens make
you beautiful
your insides prove them wrong
dared tread waters not your own
proposition statues.
xxxx.
artwork survives
for the artists sake
not the viewers.
your paintbrush last little
enough time.
xxxxx.
You lost the game
before you even began the race.
A contest entry
- problems by patteringraindrops.
550 points, ended April 27, 2007, 11 entries
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hi im SO sorry everyone who entered my contest my laptop totally died and then i went on holiday and im so sorry and i know its a serious responsibility and i am truly sorry. but i will judge them now i just wanted to comment and tell you all that
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