F.a.l.l.i.n.g from grace.
Her mind?
All over the place.
S | y | r | i | n | g | e | s
left that feeling of wanting more.
The desire he himself.
Could never fill.
He wasn't something that left her.
Lying l.i.m.p on the floor.
Comes crashing down hard.
C | r | a| s | h | i | n | g
d | o | w | n
At such a speed.
Another problem.
Another n.e.e.d
Under the influence.
[ .A. .W.h.o.r.e. ]
A total s.l.u.t
Spreads her legs.
No ifs.
No buts.
Another high.
No.
[ h.e.a.r.t.b.r.e.a.k.i.n.g ]
Goodbyes.
Speed.
Such a craving.
Such a.
fucked up.
N | e | e | d
Crawls slowly out of her veins.
.L.e.t.h.a.l. .d.o.s.e.s.
strangle her body.
Tightly within it's grasp.
A g-a-s-p of b.r.e.a.t.h
A muttered goodbye.
For [ one final ]
A | d | d | i | c | t | i | v | e.
K.i.s.s
Author notes
Speed. what a drug.
about my overdose. yeh. not something ive wrote properly bout before.
A contest entry
- Drug abuse- Drug use- Drugs for recreation. by eating vertigo.
600 points, ended April 16, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - How you feel about drugs by 6-Ft-UnDeR.
300 points, ended May 17, 2007, 21 entries
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wow...i love the title and how you encorperated it into the poem....drugs make you someone your not..which from reading your poem im sure you already understand...nice poem...thanks for entering the contest
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i would like to congratulate you on the bronze trophy you have earned in this contest. well done. viyanna rosemarie
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very nice, the format made it a bit more intense. it;s kind of sad in a way though, i feel bad that you do those kinds of things but ur still my big sis.
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This is very good, I love the imagery, the flow. It is just very very good. x3
Thankyou for entering, good luck.
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Omg...thats scary as Caz. It's fuckin amazing but friggin scary just the same...just to imagine u doing all that...it makes everything feel cold.
I love you!!
Tommy xo
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i liiike, the structure is very good, and it has a very lyrical quality about it. the full stops and lines between each letter of certain words give real emphasis, well done, very good write
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