Truth be told I am not who you think I am.
For I am not who most say I am.
Although there is some truth you do not see.
I am just an image, just any odd person, just me.
I move amongst you as unknown to the world as you think you are.
But I am more often seen by those who haven't been seen.
I know who you are, your just like me.
A mindful someone, who does often do what we are told.
I see you as you are not as who they think.
For I am not who they think, nor who they see.
Oneday day we will arise out from our shells,
and tell them they can all go to hell.
A contest entry
- Anything you desire (1050 points in total) by Blood-Wolf.
1050 points, ended April 19, 2007, 32 entries
Honorable mention
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Probably wasnt the point but you make me giggle at the end. Who apart from ourselfs, and maybe we dont even know ourselfs, know who you are?
I liked the poem, its starts out dark and sinister, but ends the same way too, but it somehow seems comical the way they can all just piss off.
liked it alot!
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