I'm so lost and confused,
I sometimes feel used.
I turn this way,
I don't know what to say,
I turn that way,
I start to run away.
I run 'til I fall to my knees,
"Someone help me Pleaseeee!!," I shout,
with little doubt.
I cry, while the rain hides my tears,
For it respects my fears.
I lay there on the ground,
Listening for a sound.
To show someones there,
That someone really cares.
A contest entry
- Anything you desire (1050 points in total) by Blood-Wolf.
1050 points, ended April 19, 2007, 32 entries
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Comments
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OMG! WOW
A good descriptive write on being confused,you have penned it wonderfully,Sometime the only sound we here is silence,and we often wonder are we alone,doesn't anyone care,doesn't anyone want to help,to know,or even exist.
A great write filled with all the emotions.leaving one to ponder the thought
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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However sad and depressing this sounds, howevr hopeless and needing and desperate, i know exacly how you feel.
Its nice to know someone cares sometimes, and i can really relate to this piece at the moment.
Nicely written, deep.
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