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Robin' s Arrival

  

 

the wind change gliding
of rebirth of the season
and the new bird song

teaches our heart to not close
the beginnings renewal

 

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  • Candy6
    May 28, 2007
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    beautiful

    great poem


  • Harrisham Minhas
    April 11, 2007

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    A sweet write. Nicely written.

    Thanks for your entry. Good luck in my contest.

    Be Serene,
    Spread Peace,

    Harrisham Minhas.