I spend a day at work
Listening to people complain
They won't leave me alone
So I can do my job
So I fall even farther behind
I slip on my jacket
Right after closing
Step out in the rain
And get into my car
The radio plays
Sad songs about love
While my mind dwells on you
A realization dawns on me
I've been driving to my house
When my home's with you
A contest entry
- home is where the heart is... by FindingFate.
300 points, ended April 12, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell me a story in 15 lines... by AutumnsFlame.
427 points, ended April 28, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MOST IMPROVED POET! ANYTHING~ EVERYTHING by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended July 5, 2007, 74 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great Work!
That was great! I really did like it. Home is where the heart is as long as the other wants you there too. We always have to take that into consideration.
Damon
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Clearly you have talent from start to finish! your a wonderful poet ~ through and through! Wow~ both writes I really enjoyed ... almost equally... Wow... Nice job! Thanks for entering the contest ~ best of luck to you!
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lovely
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hey..this was a really powerful and emotional write..it flowed really well and i like the words that you used as well keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest
XTashaX -
Awww how sad and sweet... This poem was good... it didn't exactly "wow" me, but it was alright. Good luck in my contest.
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it's beautiful
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