Here I am
relentless and sensuous
just for your pleasure
I have no mindset in your world
blending with your needs
seeking only to fulfill your desires
I am no mystery to you
all there is to know
all there is to feel
all there is to taste
Is before you
The fine line between pleasure and pain
becomes sweeter with your control
I quiver hearing your voice
Your touch heating up the deepest part of me
Running your hands along my hips
Gripping my wrists you let me know
that I have pleased you
I welcome your weight
as you collapse on top of me
Moaning my name, calling me yours
Author notes
Erotica contest in group: Lauras Secret Little Corner
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Sweetly Sensual!
I love the entire mood of this delightful poem.
The atmosphere is flavored with ambrosial clouds
of surrendered love and passion.
In this particular state the roles are clear
and all walls tumble down.
Their is no opposition. Just two beings totally
immersed in the act of love.
In fact if it were reversed, the same would be true.
Sexual intercourse can sometime be an equalizer.
One feeding on the needs of the other until both
are fulfilled. A most enchanting write -
Great style of writing ,you have beautifully guided us through a very sensual visual scene and also written in a very classy way ,enjoyed it !!!
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Beautiful poem, I loved it. The awesome unique style within this!!!
I don't like the picture though, sorry I just look at it and the females hands look so much smaller, as they are in real life, but it just seems somewhat perverted.
I like the flow of the poem though. Very nicely done, and I relate alot
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Fantastic job, I like your style. I often wonder about people who write erotic poetry? How are they in real life situations beyond paper and pen. I always say some people get the poem and some get the poet.
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Very Hot!
Great write--phew---got warm here after reading this piece. I love the way you expressed the way two people know each other.
"I am no mystery to you
all there is to know
all there is to feel
all there is to taste
Is before you"
Loving, sensual, sexy, and HOT!
Thanks for sharing this!
Take care,
Bo
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wowza..wowza..wowza...Hot lil number missy! so many parts of you yet to reveal....hmmmm....
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhh i wnat that pic!!!!!!!!
this is an amazing poem i love it all well done..if you bribe me i might just vote for this in the poll lol
laura xx -
this is an erotic write for sure... i love how you have penned this one. good luck in the contest in the group
cheers
Jen -
Fantastic!
My favourite part has to be this:
I am no mystery to you
all there is to know
all there is to feel
all there is to taste
Is before you
The picture describes clearly what your words were saying. I dont like the way he collapsed on you though, made it kind of final. Other than that it was great. Well done -
Wow what a hot and steamy write!
Well done with this one and thanks
for sharing it. The imagery is great
and fits the title well!
Great work here!
Jeremy0826 -
Great
The title says it all and you continue with that! Love the poem and can relate! -
sensual, and steamy
Wow, you really put it down in this write.
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SMOKING HOT! steamy write. I love it!
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