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[ Grasp for every moment ]

Grasp for every moment
Savor every kiss
This mnay be our last
Hold on
Press close our bodies
Drink in the pleasures
Hidden deep within
Throw caution to the wind
As I lay before you
Too little time...
Too little time...
We thought it would end so soon

Author notes

This is still in the owrks. Just wanted to get some of it down...

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  • Angel by Moonlight
    April 19, 2007

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    This is a good poem for it being in the works, I would just say check the spelling. Keep it up and i hope to read more soon. TTUL Betha