do I scare you?
am I the bully
resting on your pillow?
Am I the end of the story?
are you reaching
for a difference
to Fend Me Off with?
do you hate
my moods and quick temper?
Are you waiting for me to break,
or do you wonder
if its even --Possible?
Do I destroy
every strand of confidence holding you together?
Do I put you to bed when you've slept
your whole
Life?
Am I the tree sending shadows
on a day
with No
sun?
Do I give you
air?
am i
your Only oxygen?
can you bear the thought of
forgetting
my Name?
do
I wake you
with dreams?
would you give me
a ring?
are you Ashamed
of who I am
and who you've
become?
Am I In every
pill
every doctor
every word
every
thought?
are you in Denial
of the facts?
----am I the only reason
you're still alive?
.
...
have You become the monster
making little kids
Cry?
Author notes
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25312140/
I don't know where this came from??
about ED.
-carcrashhumor
In a list
A contest entry
- && I'll Be Your Pretty Little Fuck-Up♥ by love tank x.
1050 points, ended April 17, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ok, came back for another three reads. I need to bookmark this. It really has got to me. Told you it would. xx mama chilli xx Each read gets better. Best thing I've read on here in weeks.
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I also picked out the stanza 'Do I put you to bed.. etc' as an amazing thought. I rather think it will obsess me for the next day or two. This was a very good piece, seemingly full of edgy desperation. Have three!
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thanks a lot! =]]
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Well thank you fuck fuck fuck. Something crisp, real, raw, human. Yes, thats poetry. Put away the synonyms no one has ever heard of and give me a bit of powerful emotion with a swing of the common word. Final fuckingly.
(sorry i've been in need of great poetry)
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haha
thanks ♥
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Do I put you to bed when you've slept
your whole
Life?
i love it and yoo -
Do I put you to bed when you've slept
your whole
Life?
i love it and yoo
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"are you reaching
for a difference
to Fend Me Off with"
--this is such a great image ... the reaching out and never grasping. This is interesting ... reaching for a way to get the other (object, person, disease, whatever it may be) away. I love that ending, very strong and in your face. -
Babeee;;
I KNEW it was you before I even
read your author's notes. :]]
That's because you're just so
crashtastic hahah You're amazing, as is this write,
and I love the picture! Thanks for entering hun ily♥
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haha, aww thanks so much for the silver!! ♥
I heart and missed you!
[just got back like....5 minutes ago.]
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yes, be careful. It's very easy to scare them.
shhhh.
♥
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Hey I like this,great write!
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thanks snow! =]
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appreciate it.
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