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My Morning

I wake up thinking about you
We say our vows today
I can't wait to give you my life
And my soul
Such a great way to start the day

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  • Virgoan
    May 21, 2007

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    As I always say, I agree that brevity is the soul of the wit. You've capture magnificence in sheer simplicity in a few lines.

    My favorite lines:

    We say our vows today
    I can't wait to give you my life
    And my soul

    A very good way that'll catapult your day in the field of smile and even happiness.

    Thanks for sharing and see you around.

    ~VIRGOAN~


  • alta evans
    April 27, 2007

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    hey i have that picture in my phone, i like this, even if it unusually short for a poem by you, but it's short, sweet and to the point. lol


  • PoeticFlame
    April 16, 2007

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    awww this one was sweet. I loved it. Your style of poetry is interesting. I like how you can write short pieces but can convey such important powerful messages.

  • Nessie09
    April 13, 2007
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    this

    thisz poem is mad go0d


  • bw43
    April 11, 2007
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    awww this is so pretty it's so sweet.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    April 10, 2007
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    A truly loving and captivating write here. Thank you so much for sharing.
    Gaylene


  • Amera gold member
    April 9, 2007

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    It is a great way to start the day! Wonderful write and thought provoking. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera

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