You lying, cheating
manipulative whore
Slutting up our town
like the girl next door
acting sweet and innocent
while spreading underneath
another woman's man
drawing his knife from the sheith
Taking hold of it
to sharpen it
and make it fight
only to soften it
by the end of the night
She cries to you
and you support her, of course
while continuing to seduce him
with the utmost force
Run Your Tongue
over your rosy lips
Tease him with your body
Your newly slender hips
Show him how the doctor
made you into this pretty thing
The bride of Frankenstein
and all men are your master and king
You want him, need him
because he was with me
You always did have a thing
for the men I used to see
I take hold,
and stake a claim
But Behold!
You beg, borrow and steal
so your sword can do the same
My heart is broken
You made sure of that
You knew exactly what you did
You slutty, pretensious twat
Yet still you dent
that what I say is true
How could it be...
After all... It's you..
We're like sisters, after all
I've helped you through so much pain
Picked you up
from where you fell
Heaven's angel has been slain
Banished from the pearly gates
Your sensuality is a slippery blackhole
Your body... touched by millions
The devil bought your soul
So now you wonder
why my words are filled with hate
Just remember that Karma
will serve you your fate
It's too late to repent
The devil won't wait
and soon he'll be irate...
So quickly.. satisfy him
take care of all his needs
like so many before him
drop to your knees
and feel the rug burn baby
How many beds have you slept in?
How many men have you sucked dry?
How many lies have you told?
How many lovers have you stolen?
How many times have you betrayed me?
and How many times have I forgiven you?
How much longer can this cycle go on?
You can't consume my leftovers forever...
Author notes
Awesome contest.. Good Job.. and Good Luck
A contest entry
- DEEP, DARK, EMOTIONAL, ANYTHING! by Heavens Child.
425 points, ended April 10, 2007, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Amazing
OH My this is so good really emotional. i feel connected though cause it has happed to me. -
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this is a bitter and anger filled write that has a no holds barred feel about it, i am so sorry if this is a life write but then we live and learn my love for we all have the ability/option to say "NO" and as we say "it takes two to tango" so this female is not entirely to blame,one day you will find someone that loves you enough to say "no" when temptation comes around.. a great write although using some language that i myself would prefere not to it gives out just how deeply angry you are, good luck in the contest with this fantasticly raw piece
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Holy Crispy Crap on a stick! Wow! That has got to be one of the best poems I have ever read! Damn good stuff! At least you received great inspiration from that bitchy whore.
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Yes. I am so glad you liked it. She made the emotions run... so therefore... may my emotions spill onto the page... the ink reflecting the despair...
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Wow, that was an impressive bit of poetry darling. Such incredible emotion you put into this. I loved the poem.
Your a great poet.
DarkAngelSyndrome
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You are so sweet... thank you.
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well that is definatly having your say... well done on a great write... not normally something i would read so cant comment much... it does flow well though...
cheers
Jen
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Raw ,explicit and no holds barred ,but amidst the anger is a very well written poem here with a unique choice of words and the emotion is unbelievable ,i hope she realises how much she has hurt you and changes her ways ,fantastic write
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Damn girl, you've done an amazing work with this piece. I've read alot of hateful poetry but this takes the cake. Awesome write. Thank you for the entry in my contest.
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Thank you ever so much...
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Great
I like what you expressed here, so deep & strong..It flows also quite well..
Pen on..
GloriousGift
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