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early morning, april 4

way up in the sky
there is no bringing me down
hello
hola
i'm at a place you've never been
never will be
higher than the sun
and you're bringing me down
because its you when i look
and you bring me to my knees
because i can't live
with
i can't live
without
but what more?
what more?

the image tears into the eyes
of a man caught in a barbed wire fence
of you when i look in the mirror
a bed of nails
your hips' eclipse
that kiss

and you remember why
we fight
all the time
on new years day

but she's a refugee
and her name is grace
and she walks in beauty
on this bloody sunday
and they cannot take her pride

still haven't found what you're looking for?
walk on, son
walk on

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just a bunch of random firings from my neurons in response to listening to u2 on my compy.

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  • suzume
    April 10, 2007

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    you can see the melody influence here. it has that kind of flow. particularly towards the end. and i like it. ^^
    I miss you... but you knew that. Still do though.


    • nanashiamai
      April 10, 2007
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      thanks dear. ::misses you too and doesn't know how to fix it::

      you should come to goshen. or...i should skip classes and just go home. ^_^


  • KenjiStar81
    April 10, 2007

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    I like this.. I got a image of Jesus in this one and the virgin Mary..

    "of a man caught in a barbed wire fence"

    That was a strong line in this peice.. It hit like a rock as I saw in those words a bloodied man pined in the wire.. It was like a flash of a flash back but powerful none the less..


    • nanashiamai
      April 10, 2007

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      those are cool images to get. ^_^ i'd be curious what sparked them.

      the barbed wire always makes me think of matthew shepherd. not sure why. well, actually, i am, but that's what it makes me think of.

      love to you. and feel free to cling any old time you want. ::hugs::


      • KenjiStar81
        April 10, 2007
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        lol.. Your setting yourself up for trouble.. Soon you'll be trying to pry me off with a crobar.. lol.. But then I'll just smile and make you give in and let me cling some more.. lol..

        I am doing better though.. Pay day kinda made the stress go down a little so I can not worry about the charge I put on the Card after the vet bill.. I think that is what is bothering me the most.. Cause I had been saving and now it's almost gone.. But the sun is comming out for me.. Work is getting busier and I will start putting away again so I can cling to you for real..

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