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Why???!!??

Why do you put people down?
are you trying to be funny like a clown?

If im stupid...
How did I do better than you did?

Run into walls, trip over my feet.
At least I can keep the beat!

So what of I drop the ball,
I can always take the fall.

Making things harder than they apear,
even though there crystal clear.

Its just me you'll have to deal,
Im done explaining this hole shpeal.

Next time you make fun of me
stop and think is this really what I want to be??

Mean and cruel, hatred pouring.
Your jokes are just plain boring!

Say what you say and do what you choose,
but it you choose your way you will loose.

No one likes it thats for sure.
Maybe someday you will find a cure.

Today tomarro hopefully soon.
untill then your just another loon.

Please tell me what you think

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  • sarahbeth190
    April 13, 2007

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    haha, nice. i like this one.
    good message too.

    helpful hint though. you don't always have to rhyme. it can take away from the message. I'm pretty sure that's the most helpful thing anyones ever told me. but. you probably already knew that. hah.


    • Krystal Lynn13
      April 14, 2007
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      thanks

      your comment was helpfull, yes i knew about the rhyming thing but i like to rhyme. Its all good tho. thanks