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Dreaming Sleepers

when daylight comes i dance around it
hide away from the dark questioning stares
who really minds if i act like a reject
you were the only one that i could say cares

when darkness fals i run away with you
run away from the light of my dark life
when sleep decends i can be close with you
i can separate my self from my strife

but dreaming sleepers dont last forever
and soon the daylight and sun returns
i must go back to my true life's endevor
from this dark death you can never returen

without you i live carry on like you said
i dance not with the living but the dead

Author notes

for the last one that we had to turn in we were able to choose what form of a poem we wanted to write and i chose another sonnet and i think that this is one of my best yet

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  • the shorty
    April 23, 2007
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    nice

    how'd he like that one? i think that's one of the best of yours i've read...