Weeks seem like months
Minutes seem like days
Seconds are so endless-
The hours you're away
I wait for you to call my name,
Just as I fall asleep...
If I can't see you face-to-face
I'll see you in my dreams
Although you are my dream when I'm not sleeping
My fairytale come alive
Seconds are no longer endless...
and minutes they pass by
I guess I'm sleeping beauty~
and you're my Charming Prince
Come charm me with your beauty-
and wake me,
With your kiss...
Let's gaze under the stars
and lay down at the beach
With water splashing on us
and sand all in our feet
Next day we'll watch the clouds
and lay down in the grass
We'll snuggle up real close
as minutes...
they will pass
Without you life would be so wrong-
It'd be just like...
an endless song...
A contest entry
- Share Your Love by StarEyes.
2150 points, ended June 2, 2008, 23 entries
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850 points, ended June 28, 2008, 16 entries
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700 points, ended August 22, 2008, 37 entries
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Honorable mention
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600 points, ended October 21, 2008, 20 entries
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700 points, ended November 5, 2008, 52 entries
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1150 points, ended November 10, 2008, 34 entries
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790 points, ended November 7, 2008, 56 entries
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1800 points, ended June 9, 47 entries
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463 points, ended July 31, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful.
absoultely amazing. such happiness and passion in this piece. the imagery and depth was phenomenal. 
overall i enjoyed this piece very much. thanks for entering and good luck!
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I think you have captured that pure passion, and how sad it is now that it is gone. Good poem, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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Hehe. I read your AN. I thought it was good I liked it and enjoyed reaidng it. Thank you so much for sharing this and entering my contest. Good luck.
Ps. Please mention "the itsy bitsy spider climbed up the water spout" along with your Option number that is already there in your AN. Thank you once again.
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This is a sweet piece. I'm sorry that the story ultimately does not have a happy ending, but it sounds as though it were a lot of fun while it lasted. It's just a thought, but breaking the piece into stanzas might give some of the sentiments more punch. Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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This is a lovely, heartfelt poem and I can see why your ex-boyfriend cried when you read it to him because this poem was obviously full of love and emotion at the time that it was written.
The poem flows really nicely, lovely read, well done.
Good luck in the contest!
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Start to finish this is a perfect heart worn on the proverbial sleeve. Flow, imagery, emotion are all packed in to this snug and tight. Awesome job.
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This is cute! Good write. Enjoyed reading it. trekkergirl
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AWW.. THIS IS SOO CUTE...
Come charm me with your beauty-
and wake me,
With your kiss...
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nice write, not realy sure what to put here except it was well written
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I really like it,it good!! -
Nawww it's very cute and I do like it indeed
I'd love for you too be a member of my family, especially a sister ^^
always fun too talk too
Thank you for taking the time too enter!
Mads xox
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Vey cute poem but I wasn't impressed with the layout. Maybe if you re-read and revise it a little (maybe just move the phrases around to fit better) it'd be much easier on the eyes. Thanks for entering!
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I thinnk that this was great and i really appreciate your entering it in my contest. i am sorry though ti hear about your breaking up. good write though.
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I know how this feels
very well written
i like it alot
thanks for entering my contest
good luck
for you
xxx--<3-
Shelly -
oh wow i know how this feels...you did a really good job...i can relate...and i can see it happening...and i can feel it as i read...thank you for entering my contest good luck..and good job keep up the great work...
~:~Tiffany~:~
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aww this is so sweet, I love the connection to sleeping beauty, beautiful job. Thnks for your entry!
Blessings,
~Michaela~ -
Without you life would be so wrong-
It'd be just like...
an endless song...
this is how i felt about my husband passing all too soon. he promised me we would grow old together. it feels so wrong that he gone now.
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Nice!
Good luck in my contest!
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This is a great write. I love how you showed the dreams and daydreams, the anticipation, the desires. It's a lovely piece. Thank you for entering.
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I think its truly lovely
And when he cried he could see the love you had for him and it hurt him to see what he had and let it go .Lovely write indeed
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Thanks for this entry into the contest! Yes,true love is endless, isn't it? You did a great job on this one.
Best of luck in this contest!
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THE POEM IS DEEP
HEY BABYGIRL, THIS IS YOUR FATHER, I JUST READ YOUR POEM AND IT TOUCHED ME SO. YOU ARE SO TALENTED MY ANGEL...I'M ALWAYS SO PROUD OF YOU! -
It's really is a good poem. Really good expression on how you feel about him because true love should be endless.
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this is so great tears came to my eyes i love it...
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Beautiful.
Lovely write. Beautiful wording.
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breath in... breath out... ahhhh... so sweet and romantic... fairy tale-esk
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I loved that. It was beyond cute, and I made me sad and happy all at the same time. GREAT POEM!
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Romantic..
You're words are so good. The way that each verse compliments the previous. I especially like the lines "I guess I'm sleeping beauty~
and you're my Charming Prince
Come charm me with your beauty-
and wake me,
With your kiss..."
It works so good. You have an awesome technique. This poem makes me think of someone I love. That's your aim, to make me feel like I coulld dedicate this poem to someone. You're an inspiration.
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