Standing naked and vulnerable,
undressed of all one's secrets and fears,
letting the moment bare the innocent
and risking pain of ridicule,
just to cling to a gossamer pillow of light,
some fragile fluff of vision one touches with the mind,
having a hint in is feel of pure creativity.
Quietly
clinging to that delicate beat
from an infant born in the mind,
inhaling it's throb of virgin inventive blood,
which gives one a love
for what grew in that sacred womb of expression,
giving it so proudly the name,
my idea.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration.....LOOK Inside....Welcome to the Fringe by Luna Tique Fringe.
475 points, ended April 16, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Awesome! As always, you take my breath away. I love your interpretation of the picture.
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Thank you for the great comment.
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Thank you for entering,
Flawless. Rather like the birth of this poem, I suspect. I could pull out phrases that I liked or touched me in some way, but then I would have pulled them all, and left nothing behind..Brilliant as the moon.
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Thank you so much for the great comment.
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Oh wonderfully penned my friend! Love the title and the concept of the whole poem. It flows so well. I really enjoyed this interpretation.
All the best in this contest
Gaylene
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Thank you Gaylene. So thrilled for your comment.
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Magnificent!!
Love this verse Sweetness
Powerful piece penned!!
Wow~What Inspiration You have shared
from the picture~~
Loved it!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you sweetness. As usual you always warm me with such loving ideas.
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Wonderful wording in this! I really like it. Like how you have connected baring one's flesh to baring one's secrets and fears.
Great write!
good luck in your contest.
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Thank you for the great comment.
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