Eyes closed
desires striped bare
relaxed in the sound of the sea
calm flowing and seeping through the veins
easing out along the shores of the skin
rushing over and towards the plains of delight
The sea grass sway of hips
whispering of when's and what if's
shivering beneath wet salty kisses
warmed with in by the fire of sunlit passion
scented with the deep cerulean of the ocean's
lips brushing lightly as feathers
nibbling with a rising and receding rhythm
ancient and insistent, soft and and soothing as down
this passionate thirsting longs luscious cravings
driving in...easing out
as each breath echoes
beyond the inner memories of imagination
rolling along the shore to every wandering heart
traveling the clouds of never-neverland
with happy thoughts and cedar keys,
ruby red slippers and rainbows on a new horizon
And then you touch me,
and I know the dream is real
for you are my "no place like home."
B.L. House 2007
Please tell me what you think
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Whomever this was written for is a very lucky lady indeed...wow! This is one that any woman would LOVE to have written for her
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This is a beautiful piece, Bryan...very nicely done! Wishing you the best
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Bravo!!
A most beautiful piece. It is so eloquent and paints such a serene picture upon the mind. The words when spoken aloud roll off the tongue as a pleasant taste. It's rythmn is likw wind chimes and the colors, oh...bravo!! I applaud all the applauds I have left for the day. To a great piece. Do not change a thing!
Thank you for sharing such a magnificent piece of art.
For writing when penned from the heart can never be written wrong and in the end becomes a piece of art within itself.
~SongByrd
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Wow, this piece is awesome. The use of nature and the kind of passionate physical feel you gave behind it were not only really creative, but worked out perfectly! I really enjoyed it, your descriptions were fantastic and vivid and I could really picture the scenes you were describing. Great use of the quote "no place like home" and wonderful, wonderful piece!
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Rich in metaphore, this piece takes the readers wherever they want to roam on their shores and into the sea of life. Beautiful and brilliantly written piece. Easy to read and fall into. Bravo ! Debby
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i thought this poem was brilliant. there is something about the ocean that has always held that quality, the one that you so well drew connections to. i think you did very well with this piece. thank you so much for sharing it, keep up the great work, tim aka chlidofthenight
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Love is a wonderful thing..your words say it all...lovely...I felt the ocean and the smell of the sweet salt in the air..nicely done, thanks for sharing
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