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Silver Angel

Gliding over a silver pool
In a dress of ivory white
An angel graces the sacred water
It’s such a wondrous sight

With eyes so blue
And locks a white gold
Her body so thin and fragile
But her gaze is so very bold

Her skin is flawless
And softer than silk
Its color is smooth
Like the purist of milk

Her voice is like a harp
A beautifully soft tone
It soothes the soul
And every aching bone

And upon her back
Is a pair of feathered wings
So unbelievably majestic
You’ve only seen them in your dreams

As she walks atop the water
Without making a single ripple
Her movements are a graceful dance
Even though they are simple

She gives a warm smile
So comforting and kind
No matter your surroundings
It’s all you see in your mind

She beckons to you
And you accept her hand
As she takes away your troubles
And brings you to a heavenly land

Author notes

Wow, my first non-depressing poem... I painted a pic for this poem, maybe I'll post it later.

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 20, 2007

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    damn! this piece is sooooooooooooo good!!! I Loved reading this piece!!!! my favorite part of the piece is "Her voice is like a harp
    A beautifully soft tone
    It soothes the soul
    And every aching bone" it was sooo good! thank you soo much for entering!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!



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    • Medea.Macabre
      April 20, 2007
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      Thanks. ^-^ I painted a pic for this poem... maybe i'll put it up later.