Gliding over a silver pool
In a dress of ivory white
An angel graces the sacred water
It’s such a wondrous sight
With eyes so blue
And locks a white gold
Her body so thin and fragile
But her gaze is so very bold
Her skin is flawless
And softer than silk
Its color is smooth
Like the purist of milk
Her voice is like a harp
A beautifully soft tone
It soothes the soul
And every aching bone
And upon her back
Is a pair of feathered wings
So unbelievably majestic
You’ve only seen them in your dreams
As she walks atop the water
Without making a single ripple
Her movements are a graceful dance
Even though they are simple
She gives a warm smile
So comforting and kind
No matter your surroundings
It’s all you see in your mind
She beckons to you
And you accept her hand
As she takes away your troubles
And brings you to a heavenly land
Author notes
Wow, my first non-depressing poem... I painted a pic for this poem, maybe I'll post it later.
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best!!! by KnightOfTheRose.
425 points, ended May 25, 2007, 135 entries
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Comments
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damn! this piece is sooooooooooooo good!!! I Loved reading this piece!!!! my favorite part of the piece is "Her voice is like a harp
A beautifully soft tone
It soothes the soul
And every aching bone" it was sooo good! thank you soo much for entering!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!
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Thanks. ^-^ I painted a pic for this poem... maybe i'll put it up later.
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