The glow of life reborn
Innocent , with silent thought
Intellingence not yet formed
The brillant light of rebirth
A second chance at lifes woes
Pondering still for answers
With the glow of life
At ones front door
Wanting more,
And more...
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration.....LOOK Inside....Welcome to the Fringe by Luna Tique Fringe.
475 points, ended April 16, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wanting more,
And more...
knowing what that more and more is that one is wanting helps one acheive it. thank youf or sharing this with me and good luck in this contest you have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you for entering,
Very well written,sweet and expectant.
Birth, life, death, rebirth. -
living, dying, being born again...
between the clasping of hands and the ringing tones of another truth, there is rebirth. a refreshing estuary of desire; a collection of one innocence; a search for precision in answers given and made. And then the 3rd birth born... ~ EZB
http://www.moodgroove.com
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I don" think I would want to go around again.Very nice write written with meaning and writers skill.This is a good one.
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This is nice.
This is a lovely piece to read. It flows smoothly and makes the reader glad that they clicked on it. You did well. -
This is pretty good poem, short and simple yet deep and complex. I like the undertone message of this, even if one is reborn they will still face the challenges of life as they did before. So what is the price of rebirth a chance for a better life or chance to relive the one you just left? very good poem.
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