A hollow hole
That will swallow me whole
Is all that is left of my heart
I can't bear to be apart
We will be talking about
And suddenly you appear in the room
Looking so real and then boom
You're gone again
Then I begin
To relize that it was a memory of you
Whats a person to do
When there hearts full of room
Room waiting for you
Waiting to see you again
A flash-back comes and goes
It is one of my biggest foes
Trying to let go
Of your memory
It is killing me inside
To think you just died
And I never got to say goodbye
It is tearing me up inside
This hole I can't bear it
Not even a little bit
It is a pit
I keep falling in
It never ends
I feel alone
I go in and out of this zone
I have lost all feeling and I'm gone
My whole body has just gone numb
Cause I know your in a better place
But that does not put a smile on my face
I prayed to his Grace
At least twice a day
But it didn't put anything to bay
I on't think I'll ever be gay
Here I lay
Doing as I may
I wish you could have stayed
But there was no way
There is still a hole
Where there should be fun
Maybe when my life is done
I will see you again
So if your up there
And so am I
Any day
Come my way
So this hole
Will go away
I still feel empty
But at least I understand
That what happened was apart of his plan
For me and you
But I didn't think you would have to leave so soon.
We got so close
I think I have had an overdose
Of pain and suffering in my life
It is like someone took a knife
And cut my heart out
I doubt
I would pout
If they did not put it back
My heart fills
As if I took some numbing pils
This hole
Is so
Empty
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I can relate a little, a friend of mine just died, yesterday. It's strange right...like they ought to be there and you can't think why they're not...
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The feeling.
This is the feeling many get when they are first diagnosed and then when they lose someone in their group. I have this feeling especially each year on the anniversary of my mother's death. -
i love this. This is sad. Good luck.
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wow...very sad...i know how u feel...this is really deep
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This is beautiful...thank you for entering and good luck in my contest
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awwww
tambo i read it again it's really good i know how u fell tambo next time u need to write this get me so i don't have to hear u cry kk plz i know how u feel sad huh ya u can tell its really deep and shows how u fell about this situation i know now why u used empty as a title i never really got that till today now i no thats not only the name its how u fell about this poem but it is still good while putting ur emotion into it
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