My life is not so great
I've had alot of deaths in my family
the most dear one of all that I loved was
my mother which she was the greatest in the world!
My dad got remarried and i have 7 brothers and sisters
I don't like my life
I wish that I had a better one
My mother will be dead for 7 years on April 18!
I miss her dearly
I wish that she was with me right now
I loved her alot
She was like a mother and a best friend to me!
A contest entry
- DEEP, DARK, EMOTIONAL, ANYTHING! by Heavens Child.
425 points, ended April 10, 2007, 46 entries
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Oh sweet heart, I am so sorry to know you have lost your mom. I won't pretend to know how you feel because I have not lost someone that close to me, but it must be so painful and hurt like hell. Honor your mom by writing about her, cherish her memory she is watching out for you and is always with you in your heart. Hang in there, and if you'd like to chat send me a message.
Huggs ~ Kim
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