why is it that we can be happy'
and even be hopeful,
when all we're really doing,
is coming to be doleful
why is it that we experience pain,
and the aspects of a broken heart,
when life should be a breeze,
rather than a torrent made to pull us apart
why is it we can make choices,
why were we given free will,
when all it is is a mistake,
slowly making us ill
why must we endure sorrow,
and be made to cry,
when we're just racing against a clock,
and in the end we die
A contest entry
- DEEP, DARK, EMOTIONAL, ANYTHING! by Heavens Child.
425 points, ended April 10, 2007, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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So many questions....but very few answers. Very well done. It has a great message. Good luck and thank you for the entry in my contest.
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I like it alot! i can really relate to what you'r saying.
<3 Lilli -
I like this Ryan! Its very good. Good Luck in your contest!
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