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Fake tears

Again there's a empty cheer in the classroom
One person is now 7 feet underground
Is there someone who notice it?
Is there someone to care?
All the tears are they real?
I think the answer to all that is NO
Because when I was around
Nobody cared
I made everybody sad
Why cry now ?
Why care now ?
It's a waste of time
Because I'm already gone and I'm not coming back
So that seat would stay empty
Because my body isn't coming back
And all of you who cry for me
You all have a nice way of faking it

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  • Lislaine
    June 5, 2007

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    i care... you didnt make me sad... i will cry cause i did care all these years and you made me feel good when i was sad you made me feel up when i was down... now i want you to tell me everything you feel so i can help you as you did with me


  • falenangelofdarknes
    May 3, 2007
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    wow. im still relating to your stuff. r u stalking me?


  • xxBleedingPoisonxx
    May 2, 2007
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    damn. still relating. ur good.


  • DarkEmptySoul13
    April 30, 2007

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    AWESOME!! :P

    WOoT! i Like your poem.. the first time you showed me your site i just knew this one is sooo perfect. "fake tears" waw.. i love the title too.. keep writing.


  • Ravenblood
    April 17, 2007

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    awsum as poem and oh so true about the fakers. they only cry coz they will seem blackhearted if they dont cry..well- some do (im not one so i wouldnt really know)
    but awsum as poem and thx a mill 4 commenting on my poem.

    ta
    Claire-Anne


  • InDiE-t
    April 10, 2007
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    best

    best so far by far keep writing, keep me alive =]


  • Emo Dani
    April 9, 2007

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    this poem is AWESOME!!!

    " And all of you who cry for me
    You all have a nice way of faking it "

    i think those are my fave lines


  • Soten-Jaganshi
    April 9, 2007

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    nice.
    "It's a waste of time
    Because I'm already gone and I'm not coming back
    So that seat would stay empty
    Because my body isn't coming back
    And all of you who cry for me"

    has got to be my fave lines. <#3


  • Shel5
    April 9, 2007
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    wow this is a powerful poem. i think its good. i think there is someone out there who would have real tears if you died cuz everybody always has at least one person. well yah nice poem.

  • Shel5
    April 9, 2007

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    wow this is a powerful poem. i think its good. i think there is someone out there who would have real tears if you died cuz everybody always has at least one person. well yah nice poem.

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