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If Only You Knew

If only you knew
That I tried to stop the time
In order to stop you.
And I tried to fight
With the angry sun
To stop him from setting,
Just to stop you in my life
Could you stop for me?

Now I wonder
If I could tell you
How much I love you
Would you stop then for once?
But what could I tell you?
How could I measure
My love for you?
In which words could I express?
When I knew that all the words of the world will seem less
If I tell you
What my heart wanted to say...
I could not tell
That is why you are away

And I wonder still now
If only you knew
Life could have been better than dream
Life would have been worth living.

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  • Romily
    April 10, 2007

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    Now I wonder
    If I could tell you
    How much I love you
    Would you stop then for once?
    But what could I tell you?
    How could I measure
    My love for you?




    i like these lines most!

  • Leaving Today
    April 9, 2007

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    Okay, so it is done! hahaha...great, you have penned your emotion here, I like the middle stanza most.