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wrap that rascal

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If you want to avoid

the parenthood hassle

play it smart and...

Wrap that rascal!

A contest entry

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  • Sam-a-nantha
    April 22, 2007

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    Very cute. It's not crude! that's always a plus, especially when dealing with teenagers. I like the exclamation mark at the end, and the rhyme is always great. Awesome job! Oh, and I love the image. hehehe.


  • EatYourSunlight
    April 15, 2007

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    hahahaha, im gonna prollly end up reading all of those poems in that contest. but this is really funny hahaha youll prolly do good in the contest
    xoxox keep writting


  • Andu
    April 12, 2007
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    rofl!! this was really good Short and sweet, but immensely funny... and well said!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 9, 2007
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    I have to say, I got a laugh out of this one.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 9, 2007

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    lmao... sorry when I hear this stuff, the rhyme and slang and stuff, it makes me laugh my head off... I'm like a secondary school boy (I'm older than that and I am a girl, so that is very disturbing). Good little piece (uh... That sounded wrong). Well done.


  • forced perfection
    April 9, 2007

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    hihi

    I think its great that you point out parenthoud. I would emediately think of deseases. Babys really should skare people of from un safe sex.

    The picture also ads a lot.

    Love & peace

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