Love stalker

My soul

my life

I would give you all

I would keep nothing myself

mate

friend

I dream of you

you hold me close

thick and thin

good and bad

up every hill

I would protect

never leave you alone

always call your house

watchful

waiting

I’ll never let you go

you will be my wife

my life

my soul

Author notes

read start to finish this comes off as a love poem of sorts, but read from the end back to the start it comes off as a stalker piece, wittians are designed to be read both ways, but usually they keep the same tone, this is my first attempt at free roll wittians.

A contest entry

Dark and Visual Wittians by M.A.King. 650 points, ended May 3, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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M.A.King
May 1, 2007

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This is a well done Wittian with a good structure and flow. However, it seems to be missing the visual, dark aspects which the contest calls for. It is lovely in emotion and theme though and the form is done well. Thank you for this entry.
XxMysticalFantasyxX
April 18, 2007

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This is soooo sweet!! I would love this poem if I was your wife very very well done..such strong words and so powerfull you are very talented keep it up I wish you great luck in this contest