Now that I am .u.n.r.a.v.e.l.e.d.
Are you satisfied???
Please, my darling, never
*Sew* me back 2gether again
Stroke the linen finish of my silky skin
Commit that ultimate favor to rectify this sin
I’ll surely miss everyone
But especially the little ones
With their *shiny* toy guns…
Sweet-sweet candy-faces
//Smeared// with a dash of .h.a.t.e.
&& a glimmer of [♥]ecstasy[♥]
Lovely little shiny toy guns
With their bullets of hearts
&& marshmallow [dreams]
Pull me into your *heroin-laced* arms
And lay me to waste with your dastardly-charms…
A contest entry
- Glitter Glam Whores (Myspace: 1) by Moonshinesuicide.
300 points, ended April 17, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *dirtypretty**inspired by fave band* by MelissahhMidnite.
520 points, ended April 15, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i loved this keep writing!!!
~Ashley~<3 -
wow
that was amazing
cookies&&[love]
xXintaimteX -
this is like my favoirte dirrty pretty poem i have read, not that ive read alot but it is really good. i like the ryhem and the cool images you paint. very good have to go to class now, but ill comment some more of your poem latter
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Thanx my lovelies!!!
u guys are all so sweet! mwah, i loves ya! -
Awh.Shiny Toy Guns is a awesome band.
Please, my darling, never
*Sew* me back 2gether again
That's such a pretty line.
xoxo,
Your Dumpster Doll
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Now that I am .u.n.r.a.v.e.l.e.d.
Are you satisfied???
Please, my darling, never
*Sew* me back 2gether again
how lovely.
not only do i love shiny toy guns, but i love the way you write.
this is absolutely great you did a fantastic job
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nice... i cant top this its so well written pretty & tragic all in one... xp & it kinda fits my mood in a weird way i dunno.. but yea youve left me speechless & stammering cause im in the grace of a poet god x]
PrettyX
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god...your poems make me feel like im sqirling around in euphoria of silver...
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thnks ladies!
mmmm, ur my pretty girlies!
[lalalove]u all! -
Ohh Doll, amazing job!!
"Sweet-sweet candy-faces
//Smeared// with a dash of .h.a.t.e.
&& a glimmer of [♥]ecstasy[♥]
Lovely little shiny toy guns
With their bullets of hearts
&& marshmallow [dreams]
Pull me into your *heroin-laced* arms
And lay me to waste with your dastardly-charms… "
great job honey!!!
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woooh
great images sweeite 
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psst:
Lovely little shiny toy guns
With their bullets of hearts
&& marshmallow [dreams]
loved
cld you add your name into the authorbox please, im pretty sure I saw this ony my favorite lists but jsut to remind me!
xxxxx
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