Forty-eight hours of beauty
Forty-eight hours of grace
Golden moon captures
Beauty and its fate.
A contest entry
- Picture Contest by wishintreeUK.
1700 points, ended April 14, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful write..... smooth... excellent pace and perfect word choices.
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very nice
sad but sweet life and its short vivid story. lovely
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The golden moon captures the essence of this flower...beautiful peom my friend! ~Sie
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This whispers of delicate beauty, a whisper that tells you , don't blink for in that moment you will miss something so rare, so wondrous. Much like you.
Love
Michelle
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What a beautiful poem, Sammy. It's kinda sad that the butterfly is so short lived, but your poem gives it new, longer life
It's a very good interpretation of the picture, too. It's sure good to see you on here again. I missed you.
love and
Dee
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Thank you Nicolette ...
Sammy
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Thank you ...
Sammy
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This poem is as delicate as rice paper and it flutters as gently as the butterfly's wings. Beauty is often short-lived, yet it stays with us...just like this poem.
So good to read your soft-spoken words again, Sammy. So lovely and nostalgic this is.
~ Nicolette
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Congratulations Sammy on Honourable Mention.
~Katie~
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Thank you for entering.
This is a factual poem, the last line of your poem reflects that... good idea
Thank you for entering and best wishes for the contest.
~Katie~
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A beautiful, yet sad write. I really enjoyed this!
All the best to you
Gaylene
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Loud applause My dear friend for this is beauty and fact combined. Sad though it is , the butterfly in it's short life brings endless wonder to this world....Excellent as always , Good luck...mal
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