never have i felt this
in my given blink of eternity
for the first time, i am not alone
and so strong
on my tattered road
i've found my friends in 40oz and
dirty needles
but they mean nothing
compared to you
9 months old
and kicking
you'll lead me to the life i lost
the life, i hope, you will never loose
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration.....LOOK Inside....Welcome to the Fringe by Luna Tique Fringe.
475 points, ended April 16, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very very deep heartflet and intense A moment of realization here spelled out very clearly excellent
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Thanks for you entry,
Very touching..it speaks of new hope and the wonder of life.
"my given blink of eternity"...this is an awesome phrase..
reminds us of how fleeting this life is.. -
Hope in the Darkness
...penned in powerful, poignant lines; sad that it takes something this monumental (pregnancy) to bring about needed change. Well done, good luck in the contest!
~Karla.
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