I want to say thank you
to all at AP
For the life you have
given back to me.
A life full of words
and meaning thats free.
For all who know and
all who see, I need this
site just to be me.
So I want to say thank you
AllPoerty for giving me this glee.
In a list
A contest entry
- Thank You AllPoetry by xXGoddessofPainXx.
520 points, ended April 21, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Don't Know by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended April 29, 2007, 137 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i can feel your emotions coming through this poem. that part you have down. however, the very last word, "glee", just isn't the right word i don't think. it seems like you chose that word just because it was the only one that would rhyme. glee isn't strong enough of an emotion for what you're describing in this poem. perhaps change the word, or perhaps not. either way, it was an ok poem.
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Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. I agree with you one hundred percent. I have met some wonderful people on this site and it has allowed me to nurture something that I never realized I had before. I have a talent, albiet it good or not.
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This is very sweet.
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Smiling
It's nice to see you found a niche.It's helped me write a lot more also. -
I loved it..
I think its such a short sweet and to the point poem.. Completely what i ment by thanking ap.. Thnx for joining i will tell you more later -
You are treasured
You are part of us and we, like you, feed off the morsels of words falling from your fingertips, and inside our hearts and minds we digest it. Thanks so much for sharing.
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