Forgive me for that which I have done
i know not what i do
i've never known so sweet a love
and i make the trespasses of a fool
i hunt for those i've never seen
and leave what's sweet and true
but in my heart i know i'll follow
the one who leads me best
oh darling heart of my sweet love
together we'll be blessed
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Written July 14th, 2003
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aww thats pretty, short and sweet, it has a nice flow and good rythem
great write
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divinity
waiting to be attained
walk onto it's lands
and taste the wonder
of a greatest love
i wish to reside there myself.
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This was so cute. I loved this!!! Sweet as can be! Everyone wants to know that person wants what's best for them. Short, but sweet for sure. Just makes you want to hug someone soooo tight!!! :):):):):):):)
Laurenna
Edited on Jul 14 because ''. -
decisive
but in my heart i know i'll follow the one who leads me best... I love your rhythm throughout this poem.
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