You make me smile.
Not like the birds in the trees,
or the flowers in a garden.
Not like safe plane flights,
or when my grandma got a free pardon.
You make me smile,
with your cute, sweet giggle,
with your precious eyes,
and when I tickle you, you wiggle!
You make me smile,
with your cute, pale skin,
with your beautiful hair,
and your wish to visit Berlin.
Everything you do cheers me up,
it would be hard to be mad at you.
You're always so kind to me,
my love for you is true.
Author notes
Stef's contest: Option 8
A contest entry
- L.O.V.E!!!! by Condemd RyeZing.
555 points, ended February 27, 2008, 28 entries
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Nice job. good poem thanks for entering.
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There is that special person who can make us happy in a way that you can only describe as love. Nothing more and nothingless less. You have captured this well.
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now you really stole me I thought I was the only one liked other parts of the world when I write >> you make me smile with your cute, pale skin, with your beautiful hair and your wish to visit berlin o my love " Fantastic" I loved it .
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That's a really nice poem, Devs. It's really happy and uplifting. I'm sure whoever it's about would be really thrilled to know you have this to say.
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Very beautiful Devin. I love how you always put forth your best efforts. I know all of your writing comes from true feelings. It's just wonderful to read. This is a very loving piece of work. You express your love for this special person with words from the heart. Words of truth. And all that sappy jazz. But really. this is wonderful. I dont know how you can rhyme as well as you can. I was never able to do that.
I joove you more.
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