Rock to send,
of woods and lake partake
in melodies surround
of song in winsome flutter,
as Wisdom's words in worldly earth
and fragrant dust,
creates,
as creed with care
in carving crevasse closer,
to brim the ground
in brighter canyon,
where echo elevates
environment to etch,
levitating essence
in alleviating status,
as false surrounds
found commonplace in here and there,
end solitude
on shadows whispered,
thrashed in throats
of common care.
So stop,
step softly
in fresher field to feather flower,
fall in grace
to grass in gift
carefully curving bend to color,
as circle cleaves your mind
from matter,
in sacred touch of pollen,
scatter.
Author notes
This is a morning collaboration with Wolfspiritguide...and I thank her
A contest entry
- Picture Contest by wishintreeUK.
1700 points, ended April 14, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulations on Bronze, a very interesting entry.
~Katie~
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Thank you for entering.
There are some extraordinary images in this collaboration... the form is very interesting.
I couldn't get past the first line when I began to read, it just didn't make sense to me, I couldn't seem to get it to lend itself to what followed, however, I did not allow that to stop me... I read the rest of the poem and began to get the "feel" of it, (in fact I read it a few times and found the words you have chosen revealing the beauty of the poem.)
An excellent collaboration, thank you for entering
~Katie~
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Nture's beauty, so rugged and wild, is a great leveler, as well as bearing the upward wing of spirit to sustain soul in harmony--each part of creation sacred in it's season and place. Step softly and be blessed. The world needs to heed that advice.
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"step softly
in fresher field to feather flower,
fall in grace
to grass in gift
carefully curving bend to color"
Ahhh, a wondrous collaboration, dear Scribe...well done, both of you...Ya know I love my flutterbyes, so this is especially touching to me...Beautiful descriptions throughout...Good luck in the contest...
Wanda
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Now I see this was a collab, sorry for not giving your partner credit as well...Something that should never be overlooked. Great job to you both!
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Beautiful
in sacred touch of pollen,
scatter.
I love this last line and:
fall in grace
to grass in gift
carefully curving bend to color,
What a beautiful collaboration piece! Good luck!
A soft, well flowing, dream like state poem.
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beautiful collaboration!
two wonderful spirits blending to create such beauty!
This is a wonderful poem filled with wonder and beauty of nature....
Amazing....
Lynda
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Beautiful
Love the flow of tongue twisting words that bring such mist like morning dew and sunshine too in this snowflake of a morning hues of grays within todays I smile bright anyways, for reading your works just makes me feel that way. Such an inspirational piece that makes this reader want to pen and weave till there's no end. You created an excellent piece once again my dear new friend. All the best to you in all you do! -Timothy
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Thanks Timothy...this is a collab with wolfspiritguide...and she did an amazing job...
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