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my bed (#10)

My dream
You sat on the edge of my bed
Stroked my hair
Kissed me on the cheek
And left

And when I woke up
I could still feel you
Even though it was just a dream
And you were never there

My hand went to my cheek
So strong a memory of that caress
Was coursing through my veins
That I cried

And you know I don’t cry easily love
That was the worst of it
Because I’d dreamt so sweetly
And you were never there

Author notes

this is for the tenth option on this

Written July 13th, 2003

A contest entry

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