Butterflies embroidered
by the moon and lotus twine~
Waxy wings catch stars & flames
& mirror burning light;
Searching high above the clouds
to alter the design,
before the fabric's colours run
and fade into the night.
A contest entry
- Picture Contest by wishintreeUK.
1700 points, ended April 14, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Your Best!!! by KnightOfTheRose.
425 points, ended May 25, 2007, 135 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites---------And Quick!!! by Hebz.
425 points, ended June 16, 2007, 96 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow, Glad to see this went gold. Very much a sixties vibe to it...I'm a nut for all that stuff...this is very Donovan. "wear your love like heaven" Groovy.
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WOW!!
Very good write & a colorful one too...with a nice flow to it..
Thanks alot for entering my contest & best of luck
GloriousGift
Heba -
erm...this isnt really what I asked for...
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Hmmm.... this flowed very well... it was a nice poem. I wish you would've entered something that hadn't already won gold though. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.
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this was a really great write and i enjoyed reading it..it flowed really well and was a really great desritpive poem to read keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest.
XTashaX -
Very nice rhyming poem. Great use of words also. Best of luck in my contest.
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Wow, what a beautiful picture you have worded for us all. This is fantastically produced in such few lines. The rhyme and flow is flawless. Thank you for entering my contest.
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great write! I had a lot of fun reading this piece! its soooooooo strong! the imagery used is soo well done! nice and short yet so much was said! I can see why it won a gold trophy!!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!
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Such a short poem but amazingly done. The wording and imagery was very very well done you are a great poet and best of luck in this contest! I will be reading and comenting on more of your poems soon
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Astounding Job this poem is very beautiful, you write with great detail. great write thanks for entering .
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haha! My trophy has been taken from me 3-4 times now. I trust you won gold and I won silver. hahaha
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Beautiful job! The imagery was astounding. In just 8 lines, you did cover everything. Congrats on your GOLD. Belle
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Congratulations on Gold, this is truly beautiful.
~Katie~
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Thank you for entering.
You have put so much imagery into a few lines... every word in this poem is a gem.
Thank you for entering and best wishes for the contest
~Katie~
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Bro, This is a great write you penned here well done and good luck in the contest
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cheers sis, much appreciated!
Alex
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Simply Lovely Words
Well good morning Alex,
How is my dear friend today? I so love your poem. It is a wonderful description of that lovely picture. You have written such beautiful imagery into your words. Your talent shines through in this poem. Best of luck in the contest. You take care. Smiles. Sandy
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Wonderful words here hunny! Great job....
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Wow!
Awesome job. Great words, metaphor, imagery and flow. Got the whole package going on here. Best of luck my friend.
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That's adorable Alex! You put such feeling into your poetry. The imagery in this is really lovely. I love butterflies. I'm unusual that way. lol
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This poem is beautifully written. Lovely imagery flows through each line. Truly remarkable. Well done dear poet. Good luck in the contest.
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This is so beautiful and reflects the picture wonderfully. Beautiful discription of a beautiful picture....Good luck...mal
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Awesome descriptive write that fits the picture perfectly. Excellent and best of luck in the contest. James.
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