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~* Dreams Can Come True *~

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The picture I hold within my palms, cradled close
of you with serene windows that beckons me,
calls upon my Spirit to seek shelter
within your Temple...

unable to resist silent request~

This letter of Love expressed,
parts from my lips and longs to reach you
in Mind, Body and Soul softly
so my caress can be felt.

Just a minute of your time I take
if given an opportunity to offer,
a Gift from this Heart, to hold
and get to know better, knowledge I seek
from within you which exudes outwards~

I capture in breath, harbor it intentionally
to inhale, embrace each moment.

Shades drawn, Dreams come to Life
whenever your words walk my way
for my essence trembles, trickles
throughout this body
at the mere mention of togetherness.

Blessed I have been since beginning
when we crossed paths~

Could I please Sir have a sip from fine wine,
treasure and hold your Heart's chalice
under moonlight where stars stare?

An honor that would be priceless, believe me
when these fingers reach to release~
extend a stable foundation, future of Happiness
in hopes we could entwine, wrap our wings
over dinner and dance till the sun wakes,  smiles.


Humbly and Sincerely, Your Secret Admirer

Author notes

Option 1: Love

Gosh- I wonder if the one of whom I speak knows..
Gasp....*giggles*

for my AP Hubby penman who I covet with Love
and I don't think he knows I am his
Secret Admirer...

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Comments

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  • Wandering Spirit
    April 28, 2007

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    This is a very beautiful and quite unique poem. The imagery is great and I like the choice of words you used to describe and represent your emotion and desire. Great write.


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 13, 2007

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    SO LOVELY AND SWEET!

    This is a wonderful poem showing one who doesn't know how much you admire them. Your sweet heart is speaking out in these words.


  • sock monkey
    April 9, 2007

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    This is sure to bring a blush to his cheek. Very pretty and a great gush of tenderness. I love it.


  • ms-cuddles silver member
    April 9, 2007

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    My secret is not a secret but I just loved this. I need to know if you'll let me send this to someone special in my life. It says so much that I wish to say. Thanks for your sweet comment on my poem and good luck in this contest. s and es, Nyckkii


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    April 9, 2007

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    This is really a beautiful piece that
    you have written here. Whoever you wrote
    this for is very fortunate. Thank you
    so much for your entry in my contest.
    I wish you the best of luck with it
    and I appreciate it!



    Jeremy0826


  • troyias
    April 9, 2007

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    Amazing

    The flow and rhythem of this piece and simply astounding . The sensual feel is like silken lace filled with intricaces os lush wonder. Well written and beautifully executed. thank you for sharing .Great Job.

    *Go with God* my friend,

    Valerie


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    April 9, 2007

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    0HHH my this was an incredible read, and the one of who you speak is one lucky man . All the very best with this beauty x


  • StarEyes
    April 9, 2007

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    This is BREATHTAKING!!! A few lines in this reminds of someone else. *sigh* What a great read this is. One can feel the love in this one!! I can begin to tell you, how this one sent my heart racing this morning!! WOW!!

    Keep that blessed pen flowing my friend. Best of luck in the contest!

    s and Much Love always,

    Nyetta


  • penman gold member
    April 9, 2007
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    Excellent

    I think the person you intended this for is a very, very lucky man. Truly a beautiful write.

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