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Haiku 35

moon lights white flower:
casting no shadow a moth
slowly flutters by

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 27
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    i like this

    watching moths as they prey at night, thank you for this entry...good luck
    mm


    • Shenton silver member
      January 27
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      misticmoonlite

      Thankyou for reading, for commenting, and for your very generous applause.
      Best wishes from 'down-under'.
      Shenton