I sense the mystery of your sad eyes
a feeling of an unwanted goodbye;
if you plan on leaving soon, then know
part of me will go with you.
I have an idea that you would stay
that the choice is not yours or yours alone.
My wishes are here with you, and now
joined by my thoughts and prayers.
I have not told you of my deeper feelings
you have seen them in my deeds.
We have both spoken of treasured things
but not precious time we have had together.
So I have no wish to speak to memories
or to call out into the emptiness.
I would put my lips unto your ear
and softly, ever so softly, whisper.
Author notes
Option #10
A contest entry
- Picture contest lots of options by Mingan Tzar Avarus.
425 points, ended April 17, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Yes her eyes are very sad, however they were the first thing I fell in love with about her, because when she smiles those eys make you want to hug her, and you can't help but to want her in your arms. Well it's either the eyes or my love for her that does that. ~Corey~
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excellent piece of poetry
ok now this is my favorite so far.
i have a poem caleed " sad eyes ",
i must say it is no where near has lovely and touching as this is.your ending really hit home with me. wonderful work.
manyblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Thank you Joyce
for reading and taking the time to leave your wonderful and touching comments...PK
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beautiful
Great job!!! I love it so much!!! keep on writting!! have a great day
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Whispered secrets of the heart are amplified within the nearness of the whisper.
Just beautiful PK...
as always...
Marianne
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awww...so nice. sweet. nice job with writing this. good luck in the contest. enjoyed the read.
blu
ps. your new nick is contest man..lol
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Thank you Blu
for your wonderful words....contest man..hmmm...PK
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"So I have no wish to speak to memories
or to call out into the emptiness.
I would put my lips unto your ear
and softly, ever so softly, whisper."
Sighhh...Deeply moving, my Friend...How could she ever leave, knowing just how much you care??? Sad eyes can once more find the light of happiness within their depths, given tender mercies...& soft whispers...Beautifully, soulfully penned, Poet Man...Good luck in the contest, Sweetie...
Wanda
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Thank you for your entry and good luck in my contest.
~Corey~
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