The tip of the whip falls upon the skin
and she begins to shudder within.
I know she pulls against her chains,
for the sheer pleasure and not the pain.
She arches and leans into my blows...
more intense and then she moans.
She cries out once as the leather bites,
and sinks down low, into her chains.
She's given herself up, unto me,
through happiness and misery.
I'll see her through the darkest times,
I'll be her moonlight that stays and shines.
She comes to me and falls to knees,
"Sir, I only wish to please...."
I praise her proudly and pick her up,
"To please me, kneel and suck."
I grab her hair and toss her aside,
"Get there, and spread them wide."
her body serves my purpose well,
I use her 'til she starts to swell.
I tie her tightly to the floor,
I dress... and walk out the door.
My slave waits for my return,
every day a new lesson is learned.
She will be pleased when it pleases me,
I will help her come to see...
that I will grant her all her needs,
and when I say so, that she bleeds.
I come back and finish up,
afterward I show her love.
She's done well and I tell her so,
I'm proud of her, and I like to let her know.
Author notes
I am a Master of two slaves myself. I have been wanting to write a lifestyle poem for some time now, I think this will be the spark I need. Thanks for the contest.
A contest entry
- Erotica... with a challenge by Baahltres.
900 points, ended April 14, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Stunning ... a very good write, the submission is a gift so special that one can only truly apreciate it once it has been given unconditionally... I will be looking out for more of Your erotic works
~DragonSong~
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Congrats on the gold hon! This is a truly wonderful poem as only a Master or Mistress could place in this contest. I am happy that you find such pleasure in your slaves and may they always bring you the pleasures that give you the most teasing pleasures.
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This is just to let you know that I have read your poem. I will be commenting on poems after the contest is judged. Thank you for entering and good luck!!!
~.~Yvonne~.~
Baahltres
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