A shower or two can't ruin this day
for the sun is shinning through your eyes
A lopsided cake can't make you frown
cause it was such a pleasant surprise
Although the candles were a bit used
and the napkins said “it’s a boy”
I know you will be truly happy
for second-hand gifts, fill you with joy
I hope you like what I’ve sent you
it’s filled with my humble regard
Another friend’s birthday was just last week
that's why you get, this old
Halloween card
~*~
In a list
A contest entry
- PARTNERS N CRIME MEMBERS ONLY (Birthday Contest) by Partners In Crime.
600 points, ended April 15, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulations
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Lol.. I missed this one, Cindy, I thought I'd read all of the entries...
This is great... and hey, I'm into the recycling thing
Your poem is so funny and especially the last verse with the twist at the end 
Congratulations on the Gold trophy, this piece sure deserved it
love and
Dee


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Halloween cards are good anytime
cute poem




