(Verse 1)
Here comes another breakdown
As your starting to lose ground
Tears flood your face
Covering yourself in such disgrace
But it just doesn't seem fair
When it seems the world will never care
(Chorus)
I can promise very little, but
Take my hand and I'll promise this...
I will always be there to tell you...
You're beautiful, you're alive, you're a friend,
You're fucking amazing
(Verse 2)
As you try to hide under the blanket
Wishing this wasn't real, to just fake it
Sometimes you want to forget and run away
To hide until there's a brand new day
But you will always have to face it
Even if all you want to do is scream "Goddamnit!"
As I said...
I can promise very little but,
Take my hand and I'll promise this...
I'll always be there to let you know...
You're special, you're sweet, you're fabulous,
You're fucking amazing
(Verse 3)
Now it's time to get the hell up
Time to make a stirrup
It may seem like the worse day...
Just smile and love and it'll be okay
Listen up, beat it down...
RISE up that smile and bleed...
the frown
I can promise very little but,
Take my hand and I'll promise this...
I'll always be there to let you know...
You're special, you're sweet, you're fabulous,
You're fucking amazing
((INSTRUMENTAL BRIDGE))
I can promise very little, but
Take my hand and I'll promise this...
I will always be there to tell you...
You're beautiful, you're alive, you're a friend,
You're fucking amazing
Rise up that smile and bleed the frown...
Rise up that smile and bleed the frown...
Rise up that smile and bleed the frown...(fading)
RISE UP that SMILE and BLEED that FROWN!
Author notes
Hey this song I wrote is a mixture of the Red Jumpsuit Apparatus and Papa Roach. Hehe I know, such a weird combination. It has a genre like Papa Roach but this song sounds kind of like the song "Waiting" by the Red Jumpsuit Apparatus. Knowing that gives you a feel for what this sounds like. Thank you. ^^
Oh, and this song is deticated to my best friend Beth. She gets these anxiety attacks. I wish I could help her but I don't know how. So I wrote this just for her.
Thank you all. ^^ ♥
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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what a lovely piece you wrote for your friend anxiety attacks can be so intense and when you have them in front of other people it can be so embarrassing sometimes but when you have real friends that are there it sure can make it easier to deal with all together the first line goes along with what i just said and your last line its awesome way to end the poem
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huh this i s a very raw emotionful mix. I really wish that it was totally original by you. but yeah i really like some of the stuff in here. And it's sweet that you're there for your friend. Everybody needs one, speaking of which, don't forget. You got me n' Jesus,
-Bree
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you are a fine friend, i loved this poem and i know she will too, you did a great job on this, keep it flowing my friend, you did a great job
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hey
thanks. ^^ she did. she cried and said over and over how much she loved it. thanks for your comment, hun ^^ ♥
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