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http://allpoetry.com/poem/2329542

 

My Response

 

 

God I know Your listening,
Bring her forth to me.
Where I can give her comfort,
Return her back to me.
Embrace her Lord,
Just a little longer,
She just needs a reminder,
Of the love  that surrounds her.
Shed a light Oh Lord,
Faith has slipped her grasp
Lift the burdens of her heart,
Awake her Lord, shield her hurt.
Return her back to me....
Glide Your fingers Lord,
Across her tear streaked face.
Lay Your kiss upon her cheek,
Heal her wounds, set her free.
Return her to herself Lord,
Her wings are only withered,
You can make them full.
Remind her who You are Sir
Father, Master, The Healer of her.
Return her Lord, to herself,
First she needs to let go,
Give herself to you
Let her see the wonders of Your hands,
Then she will find herself, back with her friend.
She has now returned to you.....
Through the hands of Christ,
Anything, everything is possible,
Let the burdens fall upon His shoulders,
Call unto Him,
He will forever hold her.. 


Author notes

hope you enjoy
The link is added in the poem before mine starts. That I chose to follow suit on.

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  • Dragon Flame
    April 22, 2007

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    Lovely

    A beautiful poem, well done, it actually bought a tear to my eye (which is VERY rare). I love this moving piece, well done, rach x


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    April 10, 2007
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    Superb

    Very well written indeed.


  • Sgt B
    April 9, 2007
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    So heart felt

    and emotionally laden.
    All I can say is WOW!
    I'm still << tingling >>


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      April 22, 2007
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      your words have always touched me thanks for sending hem to me again much love always
      Vsutton

  • star wars fanatic
    April 9, 2007

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    beautiful

    Great word choice. My only suggestion is to even out the syllable vount in certain liines, as it is a little awkward, but this is a perfect example of my poem and really like it. Let me know if you choos to edit it.


  • WulfDiamondLou33
    April 9, 2007
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    well mom its good. it is one i am going to have to read to my child when its born.


  • astralshepherd gold member
    April 8, 2007

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    tears and prayers are so often all we have, but you have given heartfelt words to encourage and urge on. may your words find the mark, the heart, the intended soul...blessings and best wishes,~richard


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 8, 2007
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    What a faith filled piece within this poetic prayer my friend, I hope you know that you have a heart of GOLD. So nice of you to share it here with all of us, and you're a great example of what a friend should be like. All the best to you. Much love, Timothy


  • sublimewriter
    April 8, 2007

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    compassion

    i enjoyed this read of compassion. i like the details about the world of hurt and how you are pointing her to god and how god can only help her. the attributes of god are a nice touch


  • Spiritvision angel
    April 8, 2007

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    Beautiful write of compassion and faith of the Lord. Once we have faith we know that anything is possible without doubt.

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