I sayed up 'till one in the morning
My night was very lifeless and boring
After eating my candy
I felt crazy and dandy
But now I miss the land of snoring
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wise-child12, Limerick
A contest entry
- The Profound Rounds Part V (Invite only) by Kevan.
345 points, ended April 14, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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happy poem
this is cute i love it great pen ...as ever frances
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Form 10/10
Imagery 4/5
Title 5/5
Rules 5/5
Overall Satisfaction 7/10
Total 31/35
Haha, I really liked the last line. I actually stayed up till three on the phone last night but my mom sent me to bed telling me the Easter Bunny wasn't gonna come
Anyways, he did so it's all good. Good luck!
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