We've tried this before,
you cheated like the whore you are.
I thought you loved me,
but you only wanted some dick.
Do you have the right,
to come out of no where?
To call in the middle of the night,
claiming I'm better than Nick?
You were everything to me,
I truely did love you.
But you threw me away,
I was only someone to be used.
So instead I was left for dead,
you never did love me.
I was just your bitch,
I was only abused.
Now you claim you love me 'again',
it's too late.
You just want to be the puppet master,
in this play.
I got news for you,
this just might hurt.
I don't love you,
not like I did yesterday.
A contest entry
- X- The dark side of love - X by The Hardest Goodbye.
340 points, ended July 9, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Life goes on,
and it did. There is nothing worse than unrequited love, but the ocean is full of fish. Being used is not fun, but you are doing the right thing be moving on.
Emotional write, excellently done.
Brazos
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Very powerful and emotional. I loved it. Thanks for the entry in my contest
xo
kandy -
I agree with esroddo...
Expressions setoff very well in this. Some folks just take advantage of ur kindness. Great write you do well.
Piff
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Wow so profound and deep
Its hard to love some one and not be loved the same way. I love the way you expressed your words and told this little story. Great job, (LISA)
"Now you claim you love me 'again',
it's too late.
You just want to be the puppet master,
in this play."
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What goes around comes around. You don't always realise what you had til its gone.Looks like she realised too late.A good read
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Awe....
This I have to admit is my favorite piece from you.
This rocks I like this a whole whole lot you put so much real emotion to this piece i felt this should be in the group reading list this is not a waste to ones eyes hugs
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Wow, Very good. Loved it!
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