There once was a bunny named Peter
Who brought chocolate much sweeter
Then sweets bought in stores
Oh my, they're a bore
But the candy from him is much neater
Author notes
wise-child12, Limerick
I'm not very good at other forms of poems
A contest entry
- The Profound Rounds Part V (Invite only) by Kevan.
345 points, ended April 14, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Form 10/10
Imagery 4/5
Title 4/5
Rules 5/5
Overall Satisfaction 9/10
Total 32/35
Lol, I liked this a lot. I like how The Easter Bunny's chocolate taste better when it comes out his butt and the store-bought stuff is just alright... or as you said "a bore". Great work by the way and good luck in the round!!
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