Moving closer to a familar face
Afraid to speak, afraid to move
but somehow I know I have to
You still seem to make me smile
Your stiff jawline and grasping wilds
You turn to me as I approch
Then turn away, as a ghost
Step by step my limbs collapse
wondering if you I could really grasp
I look up your name in a local cemetary
find it, and come closer to where you are burried
silenced on the holly ground
a feeling that can't subside
I wonder if I will ever leave your side
I couldn't believe it that you were gone
That I missed everything
That there was never a chance to hear my song
I humed a tune into the wind
droped a flower
and turned around on whim
I smiled at your ghost
and again it faded away
I miss you so much
and that is a feeling that will always stay
I kissed the wind and walked away
sung to the faded face
and told myself I would always remember this day.
Author notes
Option 3: This is not about the famous Jason a.k.a Simplexcomplxity but someone that I have known alot longer. Sigh. I truely miss him, I wasn't sure if the ending is perfect, but I guess that is up to you to decide. enjoy I guess.
A contest entry
- 8 options of madness by McFairy.
2000 points, ended June 2, 2007, 44 entries
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Fantastic!!!
Whoosa... this just bitch slapped me from a dizzy height, I couldnt believe it when I saw the title of the poem, thought somebody was having a laugh and then I realised no one on the site knew what had gone on in my life, this poem is absolutely stunning, for personal reasons too. Thanks for entering!!!
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