This feeling inside me makes me quake-
I was wrong about you; I made a mistake.
There is no one else to whom I can confide,
and share this feeling that's bottled inside.
It makes me crazy; almost out of control,
burning a hole into my very soul.
I just can't help but love you; that's a fact,
and that is why I must ask for you back.
A contest entry
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Comments
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this is good. a little short for my taste but you paced alot in there. Good write and thanks for the entry.
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this is a beautiful poem yet you create not only love but sadness in it for you had to ask for the person to love you back. beautiful poem about love. good luck in the contest and keep writing
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I love it, if u were talking with me of course I would take you back
good job I could feel the longing and love
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